The Polaris Chronicles – Chapter 4 – salarta – X-Men (Comicverse) [Archive of Our Own]

Chapter 4:  Rebel

Summary:

Lorna Dane’s mutant powers reawaken through a painful device at Mesmero’s behest. When she comes out of it, she has a choice: remain a meek girl or save her heroes.

Author’s Note: This chapter is one I’m both most proud of and most worried about how it’ll be perceived given imagery and allusions used. It’s based primarily on X-Men #49, 50 and 51; her introductory issues. Here’s pics from my re-read to prep this chapter: https://imgur.com/a/xBTxGJO.

Crucifixion. Resurrection. A cross. The sight of this green teen girl splayed out on a techno-slab conjured images and themes long-admired by the majority of this country. The rulers. The humans. The bigots. It represented a tiny package of convenient morals to assuage hurt feelings in themselves while denying them in anyone they considered ‘the other’.

It did not represent Lorna Dane.

She screamed. Hair floating. Arms twitching. Magnetism fastened her wrists to the circles of her cross-beam, harder than any pair of handcuffs. For three seconds – three loooooooong seconds – she endured. Writhing, shaking, gnashing her teeth, clenching her eyes shut, she endured. Her heart thumped wildly to keep up with her ever-growing limits.

100 volts. 200 volts. 350. 450. 500. 1000. As the voltage climbed, it cleansed all traces of her old self. Her meek self. Her naive self. Her sheltered self, twelve hundred miles from home. Alone. All this power devoured her innocence as swiftly as remnants of her brown hair dye fizzled in puffs of dark smoke. Through it all, she uselessly tossed in her bonds for any give she could take.

Crackle! Crzzzz! The machines spit electric fire up and down a metal stake holding their captive. Even those who built this travesty mistook the machines themselves for this visual spectacle, but no. It came from the flesh and blood bound within. Every cell of Lorna Dane’s body hummed as the tech agitated their genetic cores. Microscale pokes and prods made the cells lash out. Their violence erupted in the shape of raw energy blasting all about her. Her whole world blossomed in emerald shades… and through that miasma, she saw her abductor.

Mesmero. With a giant M on his belt, a long cape and absurd helmet, it puzzled Lorna how this man in a joke of a costume could inflict such suffering on her for his so-called noble cause. How he could claim to be superior while watching her struggle with a joyous smirk.

“The genius that was bequeathed us by the magnificent Magneto shall bring forth from this feeble shell – a being powerful beyond all others! And our invincible leader!”

This ‘feeble shell’ glowered through her pain at the monster. That’s what he was. Not man. Not mutant. His lack of respect for a girl he claimed to prize second only to Magneto himself came through clear in his words. He did not see her for her. He saw her for what he wanted her to be. Another thing he could control. Another puppet to dance on his whims. An object he could use as he desired, under a righteous guise.

The genetic stimulator buzzed with its first signs of salvation. Its whining, crackling chorale built to a deafening crescendo, and finally… silence. Lorna breathed deep and heavy. Her sweat sizzled into clean vapor off her tired limbs. At last, freedom. Freedom to use these new powers for a bit of revenge.

Or so she thought. Then she saw them.

“Behold! She stands before us now – the omnipotent empress of all evil mutants! For within her runs the blood of he whose name is sacred unto us!”

The X-Men had failed. Her heroes, the team of rebellious youths who righted wrongs with their tremendous mutant gifts, fell before Mesmero and his men. They stood as slumped, pale imitations of themselves. Angel’s glorious feathery wings hung low. Cyclops cast his ruby red visor downward. The hulking Beast hardly seemed able to move much less fling cars.

But the worst of what Lorna saw? Jean Grey. The fiery redhead who so often showed how women could fight just fine among the boys, now stood quietly behind their leader.

Witnessing their defeat, Lorna had a choice. One playing in her mind as she listened to the villain of this moment spout off another trite line to massage his own ego.

“Yes – now may I reveal that she is – daughter of Magneto – and Queen of Mutants! Hail, glorious queen!”

Play the part. Be the queen. Or step aside, be her old naive self and watch her heroes die right in front of her. Perhaps before her time through gadget hell, she might have left it to the X-Men to save her. Not anymore. Mustering some courage, she stepped forward with her arms high. She took on a dark, menacing mien – an easy task for her after suffering through eternal seconds of agony. It burned fresh in muscle memory, so hot that when she gazed on her allies and looked into their dreadful eyes, she did her best to assuage their fears by contorting her fingers into a pair of devil horns.

The devil horns. So simple. So misunderstood. Like them. Like mutants everywhere. What the old guard mistook as some perverse allegiance to the devil, up and coming teens knew its true meaning: a ward against the evil eye. Resistance to toxic authority, to a tin man with an M on his belt and a big head who sought to possess her and failed.

It was a minor gesture. One she hoped the X-Men would notice. Even if they didn’t, she needed to keep up her act. Absorbing the ludicrous despot’s manner of speech, she concocted a few lines and rattled them off as best she could.

“Now I understand the strange stirrings within me that tortured my soul almost from my first conscious moment! For, my father’s blood, though unknown to me, could not be silenced! Yes – I know my calling now! I am your – queen!”

The X-Men trembled. Mesmero’s followers kneeled. They bought it. Every one of them believed every word. That moment, right then, she knew she had it. Her opening.

Power coursed through her veins. Electric might sparked over her arms, slammed into her chest, danced through her light minty hair – its color drained to a paler shade than when her ordeal began. Mere feet away, Beast’s Mini-Cerebro fumed. Overloaded wires. It couldn’t take her energy. Hotter, brighter, it only took seconds – three seconds – before the brand new device exploded. Blue shards flew everywhere.

Ever since they took her, Mesmero’s men described her in many different ways. An M-II weapon. A living goddess. Empress. Queen. From a simple girl living a simple life, to some kind of evil master unto herself, her captors clearly had high ambitions for how they could purge her innocence and use her for themselves.

Too bad she had other ideas, and it all came down to one thing: that damned cross. Her captors may have seen it as a symbol of rebirth, but Lorna felt something different. She felt her ancestors. She felt good Jewish men and women who lived, and loved, and suffered and died because they dared to defy Roman law. Because they sought to be more than what people told them to be. Because they were special, and they showed it.

For all their bluster, Mesmero and his men were no different. They simply thought they could keep the body and kill her soul.

They failed. She still lived, whole, and she would make them pay for what they did. As she unleashed waves of force on those who claimed to worship her, she took on a mantle all her own. One that belonged to her by birthright.

Rebel.

The Polaris Chronicles – Chapter 4 – salarta – X-Men (Comicverse) [Archive of Our Own]

Time for more tweets.

More demand for Polaris in Future Fight, alongside other “more popular” characters. At some point I’ll probably stop posting these tweets cause they’re becoming so common. For now I’m including them.

Pretty cool idea of Lorna having a kid with Iron Man. I also think it shows that perception of her as being “on the same level” as characters like him is rising.

Just including for the Marvel Queens remark.

I find this “lowkey Lorna Dane” part very interesting. RWBY was created in 2013 and became pretty popular in a couple years, yet we see Lorna used as a descriptor in the same way as someone might say things like “this character is sort of like this world’s Superman.”

The person could’ve said “lowkey female magneto” but they didn’t. They said Lorna.

I’ve always been a strong proponent of giving this Polaris codename more value and purpose.

I think there wasn’t any real reason for giving it to her when Claremont did it, same as his reasons for having her possessed by Malice, by ripping her powers away to give her a terrible secondary mutation, etc. BUT, like many things, I think it can be salvaged. Something more can be made of it.

Polaris is a pole star and the guiding north star. It’s among the brightest in the sky. A simple way to make something more of the name is to say it represents Lorna as someone who can guide mutants into a brighter future.

Lorna and Wanda together continues to be highly valued. Tweets technically acknowledge Marvel’s forced retcon (”were sisters”), but the word choice basically says that what Marvel did was wrong. He could’ve said “because they thought they were sisters,” but he didn’t.

Last I’ve got.

There’s quite a few tweets and posts out there that have said similar things, but I like this set above the others because they emphasize that Lorna as a team leader in general is great and should keep going. I feel the others I saw put more focus on the book or writer than Lorna herself.

kellensarts:

Sketch inspired by wonderful AU:
Lorna is a witch, The Keeper of mountains, and Pietro is a stranger 

Here a link, but this fic is on Russian http://legendsofm.rusff.ru/viewtopic.php?id=60#p57159

Chalk up my missing this until now to Tumblr search refusing to show everything relevant.

This is another beautiful piece and I look forward to seeing more like it. ❤

I complained about a lot of things concerning treatment of Polaris in past issues of X-Men Blue. I think they were fully valid complaints. A component of those complaints included not just what happened, but would could have happened. The good things that could’ve come out of the story that didn’t.

What I haven’t focused on as of yet is the flipside, the bad that could have happened but didn’t. Where what’s on the page is better than what could’ve been on the page. Remember that better doesn’t instantly mean “good” or “excellent,” though.

Lorna could’ve been a Mothervine victim. She could’ve been one of the mutants who got awful mutations where she suffers, which in turn would’ve been used as a plot device to show just how evil Havok is while giving Magneto “manpain.”

Lorna could’ve been Havok’s blindly obedient girlfriend. This could’ve been played as Lorna being stupid enough to think he’s still doing good, or Lorna throwing out her own morals for her “devotion” to Havok. In this framework, Lorna could’ve also been used as a plot device for Magneto to build his morality and ruthlessness for fighting his daughter.

Lorna could’ve remained possessed for the entire current arc with no insight at all into Lorna’s POV, only Malice’s. As such, she would’ve been a plot device for Havok and Magneto while Malice’s story got told in her body.

This is just a small portion of things that could’ve happened that would’ve been worse, but thankfully didn’t happen to Lorna.

draconian62:

X-Men Blue #26

Good pages I didn’t see until now. Again, this is the sort of thing I had hoped to see for Lorna back in X-Men Blue #8, and I hope it stays on this path. If Bunn can maintain this kind of quality for Lorna or better up to and in #28 (#28′s awful cover has me not trusting what’s to come), I’ll start buying and fully reading again.

Polaris 50th Anniversary Hashtag: Ideas?

Almost a week ago, I asked if there should be a Twitter hashtag made specifically for Polaris’ 50th anniversary. Eight out of ten people said yes.

Next question becomes, what hashtag is best?

My initial thought was #Polaris50. It has a handful of uses, but not enough to be a “hijacking” of a hashtag, and most recent use was January 21. I also think it’s short enough to get use. But, you’d also have to know what the hashtag means already.

@aka-vinny suggested 

#50YearsofPolaris and #Polaris50thAnniversary on the Tumblr post I made about Twitter hashtags. They have no uses yet, and they’re clearer on the purpose of the hashtag, but I feel like they might be too long.

Anyone have any thoughts about hashtags? These hashtags? Suggestions for something different?

Polaris’ Pre-Mutant Home

Fun fact time!

I’m re-reading X-Men #49 and #50 hoping that it’ll help me write the next chapter of my 50th anniversary Polaris fic. My eye set on this panel.

Her pre-mutant home is 1200 miles away from San Francisco. No mention of where she actually came from, just a distance.

So where could she have lived?

For this question, I basically grabbed the first map I could find in a Google image search that included a mileage chart. That took me to Nations Online. No clue if this map and the site are even legit, I didn’t bother checking. But using it, here’s what I found.

The red line on the scale is 1200 miles out from San Francisco. We can safely say she was already living in the United States, so that rules out Canada or Mexico.

States she could have been living in: Texas, Oklahoma, Kansas, Nebraska, South Dakota, North Dakota, far northeast corner of Montana

Only major city it could have been is Pierre, South Dakota.

Given Lorna exhibits no stereotypical southern accent or lingo, we can say it’s not Texas or Oklahoma.

Before someone says it: yes, a person living on those states doesn’t necessarily HAVE to have a southern accent or lingo. But writing of the time would’ve gone with the stereotype, as was done with Rogue.

So in sum. It’s likely Lorna lived in one of the middle or northern states of the list. It’s more likely she lived in a small town or suburb, as the only city of note in the 1200 mile path is Pierre. 

bladerummy:

give lorna a solo title

Ditto on the solo title demand.

  • She’s long overdue
  • Marvel’s given solo books to far more “obscure” characters in the past
  • Marvel had no problem at all keeping the Scarlet Witch solo going for over a year with 20 issues and tons of promotion despite every issue from #2 onward having sales as low as what got All-New X-Factor canceled

Last point includes how All-New X-Factor took several issues to get as low as what the SW solo had starting at #2, yet ANXF got canceled sooner and in less than a year by comparison.

Before what Marvel did with the Scarlet Witch solo, I had been saying a solo title for Lorna wasn’t viable sales-wise until a) she could interact with Wanda and Pietro as family again, and b) she got more use from Marvel. After the SW solo, no argument justifies not giving Polaris a solo book anymore. Wanda wasn’t interacting with her family, her sales were very low, yet Marvel kept it going anyway.

If Marvel is more than happy to give Wanda a solo book under those conditions, they can do the same for Lorna.

Or I should say they gave Wanda a second solo book, actually, since the ongoing was volume 2. Volume 1 was in 1994. So, if they can give Wanda a volume 2 under those conditions, they can give Lorna a volume 1 under the same.